Wednesday, November 18, 2009

WEEK 8 ASSIGNMENT

THE MAIN IDEA OF THIS ARTICLE is how the media shows all women should be.

THE TYPES OF INFORMATION TO SUPPORT THE MAIN IDEA is example and comparison. The article shows examples of how women are portrayed in the media and compares smaller sized women to women with more meat on their bones.

RESEARCHERS GENERATED A COMPUTER MODEL OF A WOMAN WITH BARBIE PROPORTIONS to show that is it impossible to be so small and survive. It shows that the smaller the body is, the more your body struggles. Having a small proportion causes your body to not develop properly.

I THINK THAT WOMEN SHOULD BE PORTRAYED AS NATURAL BEAUTY. Editing images of women in magazines and on television fakes the audience. We as the audience believe in what we see on TV more than we want. When we see the beautiful women and compare them to ourselves, it discourage us and make us want to be like what we see. If women were portrayed as natural beauty in the media, then we would realize that they're not exactly perfect as we believe. In some cases, they're just like us. As for the women who are already below average weight and modeling, they too need to step forward and make a change. These models need to realize that their inner beauty is more important than the beauty they work to be.

Wednesday, November 4, 2009

PREVENTING VIOLENCE ON CAMPUSES

2 A.) THE TOPIC OF THIS ARTICLE IS campus violence.
B.) THE MAIN IDEA OF THIS ARTICLE IS preventing and reacting to campus attacks.
C.) THE SUPPORTING DETAILS IN THIS ARTICLE ARE, the Virginia Tech incident and their security measures, being aware of the signs that these attackers may have, and locking down or evacuating buildings safely and on time.
3.) THREE CHARACTERISTICS THAT CAN BE EARLY WARNING SIGNS OF A STUDENT'S POTENTIAL TO BECOME VIOLENT IS social isolation, low self-worth, and doesn't take criticism well.
4.)I feel there is a lot of security here, but at the dorms there is easy access into the area. Many times we find random people walking around, jogging, or families using the tennis courts. This to me says anyone can enter pretending to be just someone regular, and sneak into the dorms and do as they please.

Wednesday, October 28, 2009

WEEK 4 ASSIGNMENT

1.) Being from Connecticut and knowing the accidents that happened around my by texting drivers I do agree with the banning of texting while driving. This helped a few in CT because it been a while since any accidents have accord. I don't think there should be an age ban because a lot of older people are beginning to text and drive, which isn't a good example, but it happens.

2.) This connects with the article because the drivers who are texting are engaging in a conversation which is the same as talking on the phone. Also the drivers use their hands to text and to hold the wheel, which would be difficult and distracting because their eyes aren't on the road.

DRIVING WHILE ON CELL PHONE WORSE THAN DRIVING WHILE DRUNK

This article is based on facts.

The drivers who were drunk were more capable for handling the driving, while the drivers on the phone were distracted by their conversation. The drivers on the phone were delayed on their acceleration, which caused multiple rear ending. Drunk drivers were aggressive while drivers on the phone was sluggish.

Signal words: In contrast, while, in addition, and this is significant.

The cell phone response is cell phones don't cause accidents, the people do.

TEXTING TEENAGES DRIVING ACCIDENT

Let me start by saying OMG! That was mouth dropping. If i was a driver, after watching this I would most likely have to lock my phone in the glove compartment so there would be no temptation. I think all drivers new or old should watch this video. I know for some people it may not scare them, but it should make them think more about it, or at least think of this video any time they pick up their phone while driving.

Monday, October 26, 2009

"SHOULD PEOPLE BE ALLOWED TO SMOKE AT HOME" v

1.) WHAT IS THE AUTHOR'S MAIN PURPOSE IN WRITING THIS ARTICLE?
-I believe the author's main purpose of this article was to show the readers that smoking in the apartments is unfair to both smoking and non smoking tenants. The article shows how non smoking tenants feel about smoking around them and how it wouldn't be fair for smokers to not be allowed to smoke in their ''home''.
2.) DO YOU THINK THE U.S. CITIZENS WHO SMOKE ARE VICTIMS OF DISCRIMINATION?
-Yes I do believe that the U.S. citizens who smoke are victims of discrimination when they are forced to be segregated from others. BUT I feel its only right that they are separated because of the danger they put others in when they smoke around them. For example second hand smoke. If a person smokes around a child, they are putting that child in great harm. Another reason is smoking around elderly people who are using oxygen tanks. This is great danger for the elderly people. It would be common sense not to smoke around these people, but not all the time will a smoker know how smoking effects the person around them.

Thursday, September 24, 2009

About Me




Hey. My name is Tiandra. I'm very shy when I first meet people, but I get really crazy when I'm comfortable. My learning style would be visual and I would use this in writing when creating essays. I can draw diagrams with my ideas, or outlines and charts. I can also use index cards to put notes, ideas, even footnotes. Once I have all my visuals organize I can create an interesting essay.